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Who still thinks its cheesy?

I want opinions especially from the girls

It's only cheesy when used inappropriately.

Valentine Song

Dearest, let these roses
In their purity,
Be a present symbol
Of my love for thee.
Underneath the blossom
Thorns are sure to grow;
Take heed lest you touch them,
They would pain you so!
Ah! my faults like thorns are,
But cannot they be
Hidden 'neath the flower
Of my love for thee?

Robert Argyle Campbell

Sonnet 130

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips' red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.

William Shakespeare

depends on whether the girl understands it or not, and if it is nice... usually, if they do understand, they will be impressed...especially so if you wrote it...

Roses are red, violets are blue...

Derek wrote:It's only cheesy when used inappropriately.

cannot agree more

Old hand at it.

with varying degrees of success...

Old hand at it.

With varying degrees of success...Hehehe

so if good at love poems means able to make the gal rikes chiuz??? Wah love god...

Bryan wrote:so if good at love poems means able to make the gal rikes chiuz??? Wah love god...

if i were to practise by telling love poems to ALL girls, will i get laid sooner or later or NEVER?

lips wrote:

Bryan wrote:so if good at love poems means able to make the gal rikes chiuz??? Wah love god...

if i were to practise by telling love poems to ALL girls, will i get laid sooner or later or NEVER?

Nope...Cos chiu ish a stalker and a desperado pruss a boring guy who tells all gals the same thing

galapogos wrote:Roses are red, violets are blue...

Lee has long hair, and he loves chiu too!

Do you know that the word "miss" appears much more frequently than the word "love" in love poems?

it depends on the girl also lah, whether is she those literature humanities person anot. and whether the poems are pen script urself or taken from somewhere, most important, u must mean it, not to sound just romantic and serenade the girl (:

Yes,Alex,if you wanna write,please write them yourselves though I can give you some tips.

Please don't plagiarize off the net,fucking malu if she finds out...

jenjls wrote:

galapogos wrote:Roses are red, violets are blue...

Lee has long hair, and he loves chiu too!

HUAT AH!!!!!

AhBen wrote:Yes,Alex,if you wanna write,please write them yourselves though I can give you some tips.

Please don't plagiarize off the net,fucking malu if she finds out...

teach us...teach ussss......

Bryan wrote:

AhBen wrote:Yes,Alex,if you wanna write,please write them yourselves though I can give you some tips.

Please don't plagiarize off the net,fucking malu if she finds out...

teach us...teach ussss......

You can still write to your wife if you want.

Ben, maybe one day I can approach u to help me with some lines on a song that I am writing.

AhBen wrote:Do you know that the word "miss" appears much more frequently than the word "love" in love poems?

Actually I've always found that the word 'miss' conveys a much deeper and stronger sense of longing as compared to the word 'love'. The latter should be used once when necessary, which IMO is once in a blue moon when the mood and setting are, for the lack of a better term, right.

It's quite fun slipping a short poem into your girlfriend's wallet or handbag, I.E.

Blossoms in the Snow
Stardust in the Sky
The feel of the Wind
Blows this Kiss to You

*Edited because I didn't like the last line.*

Derek wrote:
Actually I've always found that the word 'miss' conveys a much deeper and stronger sense of longing as compared to the word 'love'. The latter should be used once when necessary, which IMO is once in a blue moon when the mood and setting are, for the lack of a better term, right.

It's quite fun slipping a short poem into your girlfriend's wallet or handbag, I.E.

Blossoms in the Snow
Stardust in the Sky
The feel of the Wind
Sends my Love to You

Wow nice,didnt know you're a man of letters as well.

our body together
beneath the palm
we had our first kiss
i melted in your xxxxxx

from eternal love.


can i get laid now br?

Cheesy one i wrote sometime ago to another girl on the net prior to meeting her.

Looking low, looking high
Something caught my eye
No i wont lie
It is XXXX, the sweet cutie pie
What an opportunate time
to witness a maiden in her prime
Wildly my heart palpitating
Eagerly anticipating

Blah

Speeding down the street when the red lights flash
Need to get away, need to make a dash
A song comes on that reminds me of you and I

JIZZ...IN...MY PANTS!!!

alex wrote:Cheesy one i wrote sometime ago to another girl on the net prior to meeting her.

Looking low, looking high
Something caught my eye
No i wont lie
It is XXXX, the sweet cutie pie
What an opportunate time
to witness a maiden in her prime
Wildly my heart palpitating
Eagerly anticipating

Blah

You shouldn't.

Gave to her already?

alex wrote:Cheesy one i wrote sometime ago to another girl on the net prior to meeting her.

Looking low, looking high
Something caught my eye
No i wont lie
It is XXXX, the sweet cutie pie
What an opportunate time
to witness a maiden in her prime
Wildly my heart palpitating
Eagerly anticipating

Blah

to another girl? how many girls did u wrote to lol =x
so wot was her response?

she said she was touched?

cant verify the sincerity though.

Only dated a girl once in my entire life

Later found out she had a BF but didnt inform me.So i just gave up chasing her.

alex wrote:she said she was touched?

cant verify the sincerity though.

Only dated a girl once in my entire life

Later found out she had a BF but didnt inform me.So i just gave up chasing her.

Ok.Next time don't do this kinda thing again.

do what